Monday, March 10, 2008

Please Wait For Me (Fan Fiction) (Chapter 18)

 

CHAPTER 18


Finally night came, everybody was excited to go to the club. Only U-Know was a little bit reluctant to go to. He was still thinking about whether it would have a negative effect on their group's image.

The other DBSK members really wanted to go, so U-Know just set aside his doubts and went along with them.

Once they arrived at the club, all the DBSK members were impressed. It was one of the most exclusive clubs in Seoul, and the only ones who can enter are those with a membership.

Once inside the club, the DBSK boys were all a little bit shocked. The club was almost half full. As they entered, all the people inside suddenly looked at their direction. The DBSK boys saw the shock and excitement in the girls present at the club. The people in the club immediately recognized them. They were somehow alarmed.

“I thought you said you rented the whole place?” U-Know asked Jonathan.

“Yes . . . they are all working for me . . . .in my company. So don't worry. Nocrazy fans here,” Jonathan said with a wink.

Jonathan lead them to a corner where they all sat together.

“Where's Kyle and Lora?” Xiah suddenly asked.

Jonathan laughed. “They had to bring Shiro to the airport. It seems he suddenly has to return to Japan urgently.”

Xiah, Jaejoong, Micky and Max smiled happily. Shiro was laso out of the picture. Their plan was really going so well.

“I hope they don't arrive so late,” Nan-Hee said.

Some people were already dancing on the dance floor. And Soo-Min suddenly grabbed U-Know's hand.

“Come on . . . .Let's dance,” she said with a very seductive smile.

U-Know didn't want to dance, but he was embarrassed to refuse the girl's invitation. So he just gave in and went to the dance floor with Soo-Min.

Just as U-Know and Soo-min were on the dance floor, the current song playing had sudenly ended. The new song that played was a slow one. Soo-min immediately wrapped her arms around U-Know. U-Know was a little bit uneasy at first. But as time passed, he started to be at ease with Soo-Min. She was a very sweet and beautiful girl. He was already enjoying dancing with her.

The other DBSK members were sensing that Soo-Min might be truly developing feelings for U-Know. They didn't like this idea. They wanted Lora for U-Know.

“I think Soo-Min likes U-Know,” Nan-Hee suddenly announced.

Jonathan and the other DBSK members just watched as U-Know and Soo-min danced. Their attention was very focused on watching U-Know and Soo-min that they didn't notice Kyle and Lora had finally arrived.

As soon as Lora entered the club, she immediately noticed U-Know and Soo-min dancing so sweetly on the dancefloor. They were the only ones dancing while the spotlight was focused on them. Her heart suddenly stopped beating for sevearl seconds. She couldn't stop herself from feeling jealous.

Lora looked around the club. Everyone's attention was focused on U-Know and Soo-Min. Somehow she felt like she wanted to cry right at that exact moment. She was about to turn around and leave, when Kyle suddenly grabbed her arm.

“Where do you think you're going?” Kyle asked.

“I want to go home,” Lora said with tears already forming in her eyes.

“No! You're not going home. Don't tell me that you're just going to let that girl get U-Know. She's been flirting with him from the very start,” Kyle said with irritation.

“I can't! I don't know what to do . . . .You know I don't have any right . . . .and I don't care anymore about what he does or who he goes out with,” Lora said.

“Don't lie to me please . . . .and don't lie yourself . . . .” Kyle said.

Lora looked at U-Know and Soo-Min. Her heart was aching badly. She wanted to cry. She was very jealous.

“Come on . . . .” Kyle immediately dragged Lora to where Jonathan and the others were.

“So you've finally arrived. So did you send Shiro to the airport?” Nan-Hee asked.

“Yes,” she answered.

Lora's attention was still fixed on Soo-Min and U-Know. Nan-Hee noticed Lora and suddenly smiled.

“I think Soo-Min has a crush on U-Know. I think they look together,” Nan-Hee said.

Again Lora's heart ached. And unexpectedly a tear fell from her eye. She immediately wiped away the tear and tried to pretend that she didn't care.

U-Know and Soo-Min finally finished dancing and they joined Jonathan and the others.

“Maybe you and your friends can do a solo performance later on . . . .just one song please. I would really love to hear you sing a song,” Soo-min said to U-Know very sweetly.

Soo-min was sitting so close to U-Know that Lora was already feeling very jealous. Suddenly Soo-Min wrappoed her arms on one of U-Know's arm and leaned against him.

Lora's mind was strating to go blank. She wanted to pull Soo-Min away from U-Know.

Kyle noticed that Lora was looking at Soo-min. He knew that his friend was already very jealous.

Then Kyle looked at U-Know. U-Know was already absorbed with talking to Soo-Min that he didn't seem to notice Lora anymore. He didn't even look at Lora even once ever since hea nd Lora arrived. Kyle felt pity for his friend.

“I think it's time that you start being jealous,” Kyle thought.

Kyle suddenly grabbed Lora's hand.

“Come on . . .Let's dance.”

“I . . . I don't feel like dancing,” Lora sadly said.

“Dancing will make you feel a lot better,” Kyle said with a smile.

Kyle dragged Lora on to the dance floor. A lot of people were already dancing and at first Lora was feeling very ackward. She didn't really want to dance. Then Mi-young, Hae-Won, So-young, Ha-Neul and Nan-Hee also joined them on the dance floor.

The song playing was a bit upbeat. Mi-young was a wild dancer. She started to dance sexily. The other girls followed. They started to have a little dance showdown on the dance floor. Soo-Min had already joined her friends and had started dancing too.

Kyle suddenly pushed Lora into Nan-hee and the other girls. He then left the dance floor. All the people who were dancing before had also left. Lora, Nan-Hee and her friends were the only ones left dancing.

While Nan-Hee and her friends were dancing happily. Lora was left just standing.

“Why won't she dance?” Kyle suddenly asked irritated.

“Maybe she doesn't know how . . . .Those girls are such good dancers that she will surely just be left out,” Hyuntae jokingly said.

“She knows how to dance. And believe me when I say she's way better than those girls. If she starts to dance . . . .surely all your mouths will drop open,” Kyle with irritation.

“No need to be defensive . . . .I was just joking,” Hyuntae said again with a laugh.

Then Soo-Min suddenly started to dance sexily. U-Know was looking at her very closely. Lora saw the way that U-know was looking at Soo-Min. She suddenly got mad.

“Why is he always looking at her? Does he find her sexy? Is he attratced to her already?” Lora was asking herself.

“Come on Lora . . . .Dance!” Nan-Hee sadi to Lora.

Lora looked at Nan-Hee. Then she nodded. After that, she started to dance. The girls cheered after Lora had started dancing.

“Now . . . .that's more like it,” Kyle suddenly uttered.

Lora had started dancing very sexily just like the other girls. All the boys in the club were already very focused on watching the girls dancing.

“God! Jonathan . . . .You're sister is totally hot! Where on earth did you send her to that we haven't met her before. . . .” Hyuntae exclaimed.

“If I didn't know she's only sixteen . . . .I would certainly ask her out,” Dong Sun said.

U-know didn't like what Jonathan's friends said. He was feeling very jealous. Watching Lora dance so sexily in the dance floor, he felt like he wanted to drag her out of the club. And just lock her up in her room. He didn't like the fact that other guys were watching her and fantasizing about her.

“Jonathan . . . .I am really starting to fall in love with your sister,” Hyuntae jokingly said.

“Hands off guys! You can have all the girls you want but not my sister,” Jonathan said seriously.

“Hey! We'll be good to her . . . .”Hyuntae said with a smile.

“She's only sixteen . . . .so just get another girl!” U-Know suddenly said.

Hyuntae and Dong-Sun looked at U-Know. It was obvious that he was angry.

“Okay . . . .Okay . . . .We were just joking,” Hyuntae said.

The other DBSK boys smiled. U-Know was jealous, they all thought.

The girls finished dancing, and they returned to their seats. They all started to talk and joke with one another.

Then Lora suddenly started to act strange. At first, she was touching her neck. Then she started to search her pockets and then her bag. After a few minutes, she left to got to the ladies' room.

Several minutes later, she returned with tears in her eyes. She immediately went up to Jonathan and whispered something

She was very upset. U-Know was very worried. He knew something was wrong. Lora also whispered something to Kyle. Both Kyle and Jonathan hurriedly stood up, and was about to leave with Lora when . . . .

“What's wrong?” Jaejoong asked.

“Nothing . . . .Lora just lost something . . . .” Kyle answered.

Lora was already on the dance floor. She was somehow trying to find what she lost.

Kyle and Jonathan immediately went to different directions.

After a few minutes, all the lights in the club were turned on. The whole place suddenly became bright. Then all the spotlights were focused on the dance floor. Jonathan, Kyle, Lora and several people suddenly started to look over the dance floor.

“What are they looking for?” Xiah asked.

“Well . . . .it must be something very important,” Nan-Hee said.

After fifteen minutes of searching, Kyle and Lora returned to where the others were sitting. Lora was already crying.

“What's wrong?” U-Know asked. He was very worried about Lora. She was crying non-stop.

Kyle was somehow reluctant to answer U-Know.

“We couldn't find the pendant . . . .We just found the necklace, but the . . . .pendant was gone,” Kyle finally answered.

“God! You're crying over a pendant! Why don't you just buy a new one? You're very rich so you can buy a dozen more pendants if you wanted to. You're such a cry baby . . . .” Soo-Min suddenly exclaimed.

“Not evrything can be replaced or bought. What she lost has a sentimental value so it is irreplaceable,” Kyle said with annoyance.

“Well. . . I just said that she can always buy a new one. If she lost it . . . then no use crying over spilled milk right?” Soo-min said in a sarcastic way.

“If you don't have anything good to say, then don't say anything at all,” Kyle replied.

U-Know's heart was aching as he was watching Lora cry helplessly in a corner

“Come on guys . . .Let's help them search for the pendant . . .” u-Know said to the other DBSK members.

“Yeah . . . sure,” Xiah said with a smile.

“We will surely find it,” Max said.

“Come on . . . “ Jaejoong said

“Don't cry anymore Lora. We'll find it for you,” Micky said to Lora.

Lora was still crying. The DBSK boys were very determined to find the pendant that Lora lost. They didn't like to see Lora cry. So they were going to search for it even if it took all night.

Time passed, the DBSK boys had been searching for almost an hour. They were beginning to think that it was already impossible to find the pendant that Lora lost.

U-Know was already desperate to find the pendant. Lora was still crying. And it was making him mad with concern, seeing her continuously crying.

He was looking all over the dance floor. But they have already searched it more than a dozen time. He started to search other parts of the club. Then something caught his eye. . . .something was sparkling between the large speakers.. He quickly went to pick it up.

It was a locket. . . .His heart suddenly stopped for a moment. The locket was somehow familiar. He looked at the locket very closely. Then he slowly opened it . . . He saw his picture together with Lora, six years ago.

His heart was pounding, and it was as if he was hearing a sweet music playing. He smiled happily.

“She still has the locket I gave her . . . “ U-Know uttered unable to believe.

He quickly went to Lora. She was still sobbing and crying.

“Is this what you were looking for?” U-know asked.

Lora stopped crying and looked up at U-Know. She then looked at what he was holding in his hand.

It was a locket . . . her locket.


20 comments:

  1. Hey there Daniaa........... already reading...........???? hope you like this chapter........

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  2. UNNI!!!!!!

    NOT FAIR!!!!

    MORE!!!!!

    Awwwwww......trust Oppa to find it..*wink wink*

    More Unni?

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  3. hahhahaahhaah........have you read already?????? so fast!!!!!!!

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  4. still writing chapter 19 now........hahahahahhhhaahhh.....

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  5. LOL..im a VERY fast reader...i finish harry potter 700++ pages in 3 nights.

    but then i tend to drag to START reading, but once i started, i can go on and on...XD

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  6. hahaahhahha.......okay.......so is this a cliff hanger????

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  7. Ahaaa!
    Cliffhanger! again???
    OMo not again!
    huaaaahhhh.. what happen next what happen?? Yunho!!! and Lora.. what will lora react?? what happen OMG.. I'm getting crazy here...
    Please update the next chapter unnie~~
    This is so getting to the interesting part~

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  8. Unni...seriously add more~!

    Leader-shhi is going to be REALLY touched when Lora hugs him for finding the locket....right? *wink wink*

    I just hope he won't take THAT long to put the pieces of puzzle together and just forget about responsibility for a while...But knowing how he is...he probably stays quiet.

    When are you going to post more, Unni? LOL

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  9. hahahahhaha.....i am still writing.......maybe post tomorrow.........but if i can finish today......today will be good too......hahhhahahah......really can't say..........gonna write again.......

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  10. Huhu..Okies!

    As a good reader, I'll do what I do worst. T.T

    WAIT.

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  11. hahahhaha......thanks......nab and daniaa.......thanks for waiting........

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  12. haaa I'll wait I'll wait! and aahh I like the song also.. unnie!

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  13. thanks......i love the song too.......but i know you'll surely love the song for the next chapter.....it's so totally sweet.........

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  14. woah!!!!!! what can i say??
    totally great! wait.. is there a part where Yunho gave her a locket?
    i just cant remember.. i think i have memory gap.. LOL

    love this! ^_^

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  15. yup...there is a part that yunho gave him a locket.....on the day that Lora left for London....she gave Yunho chocolates and Yunho gave a locket.......

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  16. oh.. i remember the chocolates.. but the locket.. aaah! im aging... hehehe

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  17. hAhahhaaahahah.........well........chapter 20 will be posted in maybe after lunch time......still trying to finish it........having a writer's block moment hahhahhhahhahhah........but it is totally sweet....believe me.......and the song is just to die for.........

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  18. oh yeah..this is it! i wont shut down my pc..
    i'll be waiting for it! i'll just have my nap...hehe
    hwaiting unnie!!! ^__^

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  19. okay.......when you wake up it will be posted........

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