Thursday, March 13, 2008

Please Wait For Me (Fan Fiction) (Chapter 28) (END)

CHAPTER 28


U-Know looked at the locket on the table. Lora had worn it today . . . .on their wedding. He slowly look out the note from his wallet and placed it beside the locket. Then he remembered something else and smiled. He hurriedly took out the box of chocolates he had asked Jaejoong to buy for him. And he also placed it beside the note and the locket.


Lora had just come out of the chower. And she noticed U-Know looking at something.


“What are you looking at?” she asked.


“Take a look . . . . “ U-Know said with a sweet smile.


Lora hurriedly went to U-Know' side. And she looked at what was laid out on the table. She picked up the note and read it.


Lora smiled. Then he looked at U-Know.


“You kept my note?” she asked him.


“Yes . . . .just like you kept my locket . . . .” U-Know answered.


“And the chocolates?” she asked him again.


“During the time you weren't by my side, I always ate chocolates whenever I felt tired or sad and whenever I am missing you,” U-Know answered.


Lora didn't know what to say. She was so touched. Tears started to form in her eyes.


“Why? Why are you crying? Did I do something wrong?” U-Know asked with concern, as he wiped away Lora's tears with his hand.


“No . . .you didn't do anything wrong . . . . I am crying . . . .because I am so happy. I never thought I could ever be this happy . . . .Thank you . . . .Thank you . . . .for loving me . . . .for waiting for me . . . .”


“I should be the one thanking you. I have done so many hurtful things to you, but you still loved me. I promise I'll do my best to make you happy. And no matter what happens . . . .I will always be by your side. Thank you for entering my life and being my wife . . . .” U-know said with love in his eyes.


Lora looked into U-Know' eyes. Lora could finally see the love she had been dreaming of since she was a little girl.


U-Know slowly kissed Lora . . . .He had been dreaming about this moment for a very long time. U-Know' kiss was very gentle and sweet at first. But as time passed, his kiss deepened and became more passionate. He couldn't stop himself anymore. He slowly untied Lora's robe. And within seconds, he was already carrying her to their bed.


He gently laid Lora on the bed, and he started to kiss her again. Lora kissed U-Know passionately as well. She had also been dreaming of making love to him. She loved him with all her heart.


Now that she was his wife. She can finally give herself to him without any hesitation. She belonged to him now . . . .and he belonged to her.


There was nothing stopping them now. They could finally express their true feelinsg for each other.


As U-Know made to Lora. He could feel her heart beating very fast. U-Know felt he was the happiest man in the world. He was finally making love to the only girl he has ever given his heart to. And from now on, he was going to show her and make her feel how much he loved her . . . .every night . . . . every day . . . .for the rest of their lives.


“Good morning!” Lora said as she kissed U-Know on the forehead.

“Morning already? Come back to bed. . . .” U-Know said.


“Come on . . . .You promised we were going out today,” Lora said with a smile.


“Okay . . . .” U-Know replied with a smile.


“Before you get out of bed . . . .Here take this . . .” Lora said as she hurriedly pushed a piece of chocolate into U-Know' mouth. She was sitting beside him on the bed.


“Chocolate? Why so early in the morning?” U-Know asked as he started to chew the chocolate.


“Well . . . .I just thought that since we are going out today . . . .You're going to be very tired so I just wanted to give you the chocolate in advance . . .” Lora answered with a sweet smile.


U-Know felt touched by what Lora said. He was truly very lucky.


“Since it's too early to go out . . . . Why don't we just stay here and do something else?” U-Know asked.


“Like what?” Lora asked innocently.


U-Know suddenly hugged Lora and drew her close. Then he kissed the tip of her nose.


“Do you really have to ask what I want to do?” U-Know asked with a naughty smile.


“U-Know . . . . .It's already morning . . . .Aren't you tired yet?” Lora said with a naughty smile as well.


“No . . . . I'll never get tired of making love to you. Come here . . . I want to hug you. . . .” U-Know said with a devilish smile.


“No! Catch me first!” Lora said with a laugh. She quickly jumped out of bed avoiding U-Know' hand.


“Here I come . . . . . I am gonna catch you and then I'm going to tie you to the bed so you can't get away from me . . . .” U-Know said while laughing.


U-Know ran after Lora. They happily ran around the room chasing and laughing at one another. They were like children playing. U-Know and Lora were both very happy. They were going to spend the rest of their lives together. And they have promised each other while they were making love the night before that they will always be by each other's side no matter what happens . . . . Guiding . . . . Taking care . . . . Understanding . . . . Supporting . . . . . Protecting . . . . And loving each other until the end of time.........



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15 comments:

  1. lol this part is too mushy for words XD

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  2. Omo..
    goosebumps!
    hahahaha.. naahh.. its not that very rated... but ~
    hahah Yunho sounds so naughty!
    ya Yunho...
    hahaha... anyway
    Nice nice nice story unnie.. i like it!
    Congrats to our unnie for finishing the chapter!
    wooottt!!!

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  3. hahhaahah...........really ........so any other comments........so what do you think nab........was the quality of the fic affected because i rushed it???

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  4. hahahahah.....i am very happy finished and posted 5 chapters in 5 hours..........ahhahhhahahh........really very happy..........

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  5. well i think some of the quality... is quite hmm affected.
    but still you manage to make it very good..
    and wow 5 hours thats very fast..
    bcuz I see some of the chapter is very short unnie~ thats why~ but overall its good!!

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  6. well......the chap are short because i want to emphasize the exact scene on each chapter....... that's why

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  7. and i really wanted to use the specific songs for each scene

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  8. well.......i would just like to apologize for everyone who have been reading this fic......... it seems i may have made a very bad idea to finish this fic too soon so the whole effect of the last five chapters is somehow bad...........anyway.........i will try to make up with the next max fan fic.......really sorry if some of you may become disappointed with my last five chapters............really very sorry..........

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  9. i hope all you will still continue to read and support my next max fic...........really very sorry if you became disappointed with this fic.................

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  10. Awwwww~

    Unni, that was way too mushy for me...>.<

    LOL. But I like it, overall. Yunho's naughty side is shown, I thought he's poker-stiff. LOL.

    I LIKE IT!!! ;D

    Congratzzzz Unni!

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  11. ayeeeee..... too mushy!! agree!!! but i like it!!! XD
    unnie.. u know that i like it so much, right? hahahaha!!!
    very naughty Yunho! but that's ok coz they are already adults!!!! haha!

    unnie..dont make Changmin a naughty one like Yunho... hehehehe

    another great fanfic of Unnie!!!! Congratz!!!!! ^__^
    thanks!!!

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  12. thanks also tin........glad you liked it............ Max's fic up next after 30 minutes.......

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