Sunday, March 23, 2008

Online Now (Fan Fiction) (Chapter 15)

 

CHAPTER 15



As Hana looked at Max, she couldn't control her feelings any longer. Her tears suddenly started falling one by one.


“Why? Why are you crying?” Max suddenly asked with concern.


Hana looked at Max's face. She could see that he was very concerned with her. Hana suddenly felt very weak herself. She then knelt down in front of Max. Again she looked at Max's face, as her tears continuously flowed.


“Why? What's wrong?” Max asked again. He then gently wiped away Hana's tears with his hand.


As Max's hand gently touched Hana's face, she could feel her heart was overflowing with joy . . . . and love for him.


“You silly boy . . . .Why did you let yourself get sick?” she asked with tears in her eyes.


Max looked at Hana. He could see and feel her concern for him. And then she looked straight into her eyes. His heart suddenly stopped.


“Could it be? . . . . Is it love I am seeing in Hana's eyes?” Max suddenly started to ask himself.


As for Hana, she couldn't stand seeing Max being so sic anymore. She was going to the store even if he didn't want her to.


Hana was about to stand up again when . . . . Max suddenly pulled her right into his arms. He then embraced her tightly. Hana was surprised with Max did. She just stood motionless as Max embraced her.


“Hana. . . .just stay by my side please. I'll be all right as long as you're near me . . . I don't need anything else except you . . . .” Max said as he embraced her.


Max was so happy. He was finally able to hold Hana in his arms. How he wished she could stay in his arms forever.


As Max was holding Hana in his arms . . . . she started to cry uncontrollably. Max immediately released Hana.


“Why?” Max asked again.


“Why do you have to be so nice? Why do you have to make me feel that you love me?” she asked.


“Because. . . .I do . . . I do love you . . . . with all my heart,” he replied.


Hana looked at Max's eyes. It was true. She could see love in his eyes. Hana suddenly felt she could no longer lie to herself anymore. She also loved Max. And she wasn't afraid to love him anymore.


At that instant . . . .she had finally decided to give their love a chance. She was willing to do anything . . . .and sacrifice everything just to be with him.


Hana suddenly embraced Max. She loved him and she wasn't going to deny any longer.


“Hana . . . .” Max uttered. He was totally shocked that she had embraced him.


“I love you Max. I have been denying this . . . .because I was too afraid to love you. I am afraid that I will only be a bother to you. You're a famous singer. . . .while I'm just an ordinary girl . . . .”


“Sssh . . . . Hana . . . . I love you without any conditions. I love you for who you are and not for any other reasons. You don't have to be afraid of anything . . . .because from now . . . . I will protect and love you . . . .” Max said.


Then Max slowly lowered his head and gently kissed Hana. It was the most wonderful thing that has ever happened in his life.


Hana just allowed Max to kiss her. She didn't refuse like what she did with Jong Soo. Somehow she felt very secure in his arms. And she felt kissing him was the most natural thing in the world. She loved him and she was already very sure of it.


Max kissed Hana very gently. He wanted to hold her forever. He didn't care about anything else at that moment. All he could think about was he wanted her. He loved her with all his heart and he was never going to let her go.


Max's kiss suddenly deepened and became more passionate. Hana had already started kissing him passionately as well. They both knew and felt what each of them wanted. They loved each other and they both wanted to share that love.


Slowly Max started undressing Hana. She didn't try to stop him. She was willing to give herself to him just to prove to him that she loved him. Max couldn't believe he was actually making love to Hana. It was like a dream . . . . a dream that he didn't want to wake up from.


33 comments:

  1. Hello everybody............. hope all of you will like this chapter........ i will be offline again tomorrow so chapter 16 will be on tuesday.......i will miss you guys.......hope you will miss me too...........

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  2. Hahahaha!

    *you know why I'm laughing, Unni*

    ^.^

    This is the chapter that will make Minnie's fans cry of a major heartbreak.. ^.^

    Nice, I want to see what happens after this.. They're in too deep in this one. ^.^

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  3. hahhahhaha..........minnie is not so innocent anymore............
    you know what i mean.....

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  4. Aigoo~

    Even if he's not so innocent in this fic, he's still innocent in my book.^.^

    Only innocent people read Harry Potter --> me and Minnie in the same club..^.^

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  5. hey i read harry potter too and look at me............"AM I INNOCENT?" hahhahhahhah

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  6. NAh............. i am certainly not innocent.........hahahhhahhahaha

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  7. Not THAT innocent I guess...

    Minnie and I are innocent!!!! ^.^

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  8. hahhahahha.............. well........that only proves that not all people who read harry potter books are innocent...........

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  9. bye guys .......
    chapter 16 will be on tuesday..........gonna miss all of you

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  10. Unnie..
    hahahah
    *faint* joking..
    hahahaha.... his making love also?
    hahaha yeah Max fans will die bcuz of this..
    Anyway I love this chapter!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE!
    And Unnie i love the song, can you please give this song to me??
    Unnie where are you going?? you left me again...T___T"

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  11. OMG OMG OMG!!!!
    hahaha... it's so romantic!!! ^^
    yup yup... minnie fans will faint cuz of the last part... hehe XD

    unnie, if u write jaejoong fic, pls dont let me read. LOLssss...
    I'm gonna DIE ... hahahah XD

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  12. hi guys......glad all of you liked this chapter.........well.....i'll be online for only a short time today.... so chapter 16 will be done and posted tomorrow okay..............hehhehheh......

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  13. as for making minnie fans faint.......hehhehe........it is really needed in the story......sorry to all the minnie fans............hhahhhahaahha.........................

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  14. hi junkilover........hhahahha.........this chapter.....is not that bad.........believe me........hehheh.......and i already made a jaejoong fic......the very first one. . . .love beyond the stars but it isn't finished yet......hehehhe got hooked on doing other fics.........but it also has a love scene too...........hahhahah........ already posted that part in the fic........hehhheheh

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  15. Nab........i'll be giving you the song......you liked it huh ???........ i also fell in love with it......hehehehe so i used it in this chapter

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  16. well.......nab here is the song......... http://www.sendspace.com/file/fmi76n
    enjoy listening to it.........

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  17. FAINT FAINT FAINT.

    Thank god Minnie is still a good boy ^.^

    I hope in Dolphin's fic, there's not so much 'love-in-the-air-' feeling. I'm so gonna die is there is. T.T

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  18. then..........prepare already..................ahahahhaahahah

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  19. tin........already sent you a personal message better read that instead of this.................hahhaahahhhaah............i think you're gonna faint after you do read it.............ahhahahah

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  20. LOL!

    Tin Unni, prepare hankies if you love Minnie that much ^.^

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  21. YUP>>>>>>>>>>
    prepare hankies.........tin.........hahhahhhaah........

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  22. unnie!!! i read your pm first!!!! hahahaha! i love it!!!!! *blush*
    i didnt faint.. i want more!!!!! BITIN SIYA!!! wahahahaha!

    hmm.. this didnt make me feel heartbroken... wahahaha!
    CHANGMIN!!!!!! you're so good!!! XDD
    u know what i mean unnie..^.~

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  23. ahhahhahhahaha............tin...............you're making me faint.............of LAUGHING.................ahahaahaahahhahahhaah

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  24. naiimagine ko talaga siya... (pervert! XD)
    i felt sorry para sa mga minors.. hindi nila mababasa ang uncut version.. hahahaha!
    natatawa ako sa part na hindi na macontrol ni Max ang sarili niya... XD
    unnie.. di niya macontrol bakit mo naman pinatulog agad???? hahahahaha!

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  25. hahaahah........sorry.............hindi ko na kase makayanan na iimagine na ginagawa niya yun eh.......hindi ko na kayang isulat............hahhahhha...........kaya pinatulog ko na lang siya.........ahhhahahahah

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  26. wahahaha! hindi na makayanan ni unnie? sayang! hahahaha..
    thanks uli sa magandang chapter!!! ^__^

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  27. okay....chapter 16.........will be posted in a few minutes..........hope you can wait..

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  28. di able tin..........tingnan natin kung me second round pa...........ahhahhhah..........pag nakayanan ko pa uli gumawa..........hehhehehehh..........mas gagawin kong mas wild and elaborate.........and hindi na nakakabitin.............hahahahhahhahhaha

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  29. kaya mo yan unnie!! HWAITING!!!!
    MAX HWAITING!!! hahahaha!

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  30. hahaahhahhhahah.................... anong kaya??? kaya ko pang gumawa ng continuation ng alam mo na sa chapter 15? ahhahahahah........okay ........i'll try........hahhhhaah

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  31. oo unnie.. sabi mo kung may second round pa eh.. hehehehehe
    kung kaya lang naman.. wahahahaha!

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  32. hheheeh.....don't worry.......we'll see........padalhan ulit kita........hehhehheheheh

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